tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post2891394718495127936..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Dia Foundation in Soho- The Earth Room (revised)moderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-25735954078640845932015-12-09T23:29:23.922-08:002015-12-09T23:29:23.922-08:00Yen, I so much enjoyed your review of The Earth Ro...Yen, I so much enjoyed your review of The Earth Room. Actually, my review was about this piece as well! haha We connected with this art work some how. Overall, you greatly mentioned about entire environment of this exhibition and work it self. Especially, I like you commented about temperature and air of the gallery space. It is exactly what there is. Personally, if you revise some of grammatical matter, this is successful review. If you want to work deeper way later, it would be helpful to mention about aesthetic point which is related with beauty of nature for improving your review to high level. But for this assignment, this is enough I think. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13324848435585686874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-72391818168900389152015-12-09T14:09:28.925-08:002015-12-09T14:09:28.925-08:00Hi Yen, I think your review provides enough backgr...Hi Yen, I think your review provides enough background information to really provide some context to the audience to understand this piece. I definitely agree on the temperature difference inside the space, and I like how you contrast with the busy outside world, while this space feels like time has frozen. With a couple grammatical revisions, I think your review is great.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00400084240513885487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-58589343337085415472015-12-02T20:15:23.652-08:002015-12-02T20:15:23.652-08:00I enjoyed this piece so much, even some may debate...I enjoyed this piece so much, even some may debate that it is too straight forward. The way it shows does not allow the viewers do much with this sculpture, but take a look of it on the only one side, which you also mentioned in this review. I see it as a down side of this show. I really like how you have the basic background introduction at the beginning of the review. It gives a very clear sense of what this is before it goes farther on the description. I also agree that the location of this piece is important and should be mentioned.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10003407454375780154noreply@blogger.com