tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post4211336042025972286..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Containers and Their Drivers; A Seminal Retrospective of the Work of Mark Leckeymoderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-56351407321671253132016-11-11T08:23:37.442-08:002016-11-11T08:23:37.442-08:00While your description of the work being presented...While your description of the work being presented is accurate, the first paragraph seems to just list off different pieces of the show. Maybe choose one or two of the examples you put in and elaborate on how they contribute to the show as a whole and the ideas that Leckey touches on. You do address this in the closing sentences but I think this would be stronger if it was interspersed throughout the first paragraph as well. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06404276332388031646noreply@blogger.com