tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post4253783120552697869..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Garry Winogrand "Color" at the Brooklyn Museum moderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-88943282403997378032019-11-18T17:44:01.366-08:002019-11-18T17:44:01.366-08:00Hi Stephanie
I really like the fact the you give b...Hi Stephanie<br />I really like the fact the you give background information in the beginning, it is very constructive in the terms of understanding. Also I really like your ending too, the ending is poetic and perfectly summarize the artist's theme of work and your own review. I do wish there are smaller paragraphs rather than a big paragraph though.Ziping Wanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12438799510898739224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-16781027262963731352019-11-14T12:21:12.968-08:002019-11-14T12:21:12.968-08:00Hi Stephanie,
Your writing is very well-written! ...Hi Stephanie, <br />Your writing is very well-written! I just want you to expand the words in the last part: “photographer’s compositional tendencies and recurring themes.” I thought the words are a little bit broad. Other than that, it looks good to me. So Yehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11926755021306696200noreply@blogger.com