tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post4466150898799304007..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Valerie Piriano - Photo Playmoderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-30238371183571278582013-11-07T02:10:11.510-08:002013-11-07T02:10:11.510-08:00I see that you have provided the artist’s intentio...I see that you have provided the artist’s intention well enough so a reader who has not seen the show could still get the idea of the overall atmosphere of the show. However, agreeing with other’s comments, I find there is lack of visual information on what is actually put on view. Review seems to have gone too far mentioning about the mistakenly used projector, which I don’t agree on happening by accident. Due to some vague expressions and also with very little description about other work, I am not able to grasp the scene as a whole. Perhaps you could specify what made the exhibit feel ’romantic”, by providing visual details of other work. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01935673779105687121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-49167796444794046712013-10-31T08:40:28.136-07:002013-10-31T08:40:28.136-07:00I enjoyed your review because you illustrated the ...I enjoyed your review because you illustrated the conflicting elements of the show well: on the one hand, it was an arresting piece, and on the other hand, it felt unresolved. Although I understand the question with the projector, I don’t think that there was a mistake on the gallery’s behalf – I think we should see everything in the show as completely intentional. I would also like a bit more analysis about the content in the show: what do you think she is trying to say with these materials? And on a nit-picky note, please proof-read for spelling and sentence structure. Jessica Adamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00370524473484504319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-62117474058086335782013-10-22T21:04:04.703-07:002013-10-22T21:04:04.703-07:00(Raquel: PirAIno)!
I think interesting, strong, an...(Raquel: PirAIno)!<br />I think interesting, strong, and valid points are made in this review, but I think it would be strengthened by more structuring and organizing. Some sentences are a little confusing and thoughts not fully flushed out, but I appreciate being given details (like about the relief 'drawings'). I think if you organized this point by point and backed it up with those detailed examples it would be much clearer and stronger. I agree that there is a lot of content going on with Piraino and her themes and what was going on with the show could really be brought into a contemporary conversation.JEShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14213745055568048079noreply@blogger.com