tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post5164277052545957844..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Do Ho Suh: Home Within Homemoderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-16411114101913806452011-10-14T08:28:41.768-07:002011-10-14T08:28:41.768-07:00This was one of my personal favorite shows we have...This was one of my personal favorite shows we have seen. You seem to adequately describe each "piece" as well as the underlying meaning behind the pieces. I thought that each description clearly gave the viewer the sense of what is in the exhibition. My only critique of your writing sample is that the conclusion at the end is a little lacking. You have described the show in depth but not given the reader your assessment of the show as clearly are your description. The ending seems like it needs to come together better. Otherwise I really enjoyed your article! It made me want to see the show all over again.erin e.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05567503939694566810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-70746778627571526522011-10-12T16:41:53.683-07:002011-10-12T16:41:53.683-07:00Greetings Elizabeth,....After reading your blog I ...Greetings Elizabeth,....After reading your blog I felt convinced, informed, and enticed to seek out this exhibition (though it wasn't personally one of my favourites.) <br /><br />Your second paragraph I feel needs a little bit more description into how the collisions bring to light the cultural clash that the artist conveys...perhaps a description into the differing furnitute, structure, and/ or even the scale of both houses, instead of concentrating on the Rhode Island townhouse solely.<br /><br />In your fourth paragraph your explanation of how the Specimen Series functions is obscure. An elaboration on how their delicate aesthetic illicit pity on behalf the owner. Additionally, "...who's experience they are mirroring" needs to be corrected to "whose experience they are mirroring."<br /><br />Your conclusion is open- ended conjuring interest and curiosity as it invites the viewer to experience this cultural exhibition for themselves.<br /><br />Great<br /><br />DJDJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11431774421171101270noreply@blogger.com