tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post5169509731207343077..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Body Double by Bianca Beck at Rachel Uffnermoderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-48014811871597566732020-08-25T00:48:30.369-07:002020-08-25T00:48:30.369-07:00Excellent post. I want to thank you for this infor...Excellent post. I want to thank you for this informative read, I really appreciate sharing this great post. Keep up your work…<br /><a href="https://canvasbynumbers.com/collections/paint-by-numbers-kits-landscapes-collection" rel="nofollow">paint by numbers landscape</a><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07161329933092391987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-34380342321583728652018-12-09T12:12:01.071-08:002018-12-09T12:12:01.071-08:00
I like how you describe your feelings and thought...<br />I like how you describe your feelings and thoughts when you walked into the gallery. This really brings me into the show with your sequence. I like the way how you organize the review, first you talk about how they look like and then you start to talk about the art works in deeper meanings. Your analysis is very strong and comprehensive. It would be better if you have a final sentence to summarize your thoughts and comments to make the review more powerful. shenyi zhanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15601036866288451556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-13327063149374138132018-12-06T17:04:05.218-08:002018-12-06T17:04:05.218-08:00The pictures and the way you described sharing the...The pictures and the way you described sharing the space with the sculptures are fantastic because I was able to remember my experience there. If you could specify the political protests that inspired these pieces then I would get the connection you are making. The last paragraph suddenly contrasts everything else so a smoother transition into your opinion about the lack of attention going to the paintings would make sense. A concluding sentence that goes back to how you were mesmerized by the sculptures but not as much with the paintings would bring your piece to a great end.Minhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04055886134507836522noreply@blogger.com