tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post533266858654305556..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: CINDY HINANT AT JOE SHEFTEL GALLERYmoderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-25173172175343552692012-12-07T09:47:56.701-08:002012-12-07T09:47:56.701-08:00Overall, I appreciate your review. However, it doe...Overall, I appreciate your review. However, it does need some clarification. The first paragraph seems as if it's setting up some larger critique, but it never really gets there. You mention various movements/aspects of art history, but I feel like there is a way to expand upon these throughout the rest of the review. How does the "pop culture" aspect destroy the "fine art" aspect? When you reference art history, also remember pop culture has its own niche. <br />Jaclynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14050618205258919826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-81724988023169031922012-12-03T17:00:56.506-08:002012-12-03T17:00:56.506-08:00The introduction could use some clarifications. Th...The introduction could use some clarifications. There are claims and descriptions that set the review up for a vague first impression. Does Hinant’s work make a direct opposition to movements of the past? Is this the focus of the work? Putting the work into this historical framework does not help me, as a reader, to get a grasp of what this work is trying to do. Is it feminist? Or is it art-historical critique? There are opposing ideas of the artist’s content, and the content you are creating that confuses me. A concluding paragraph could have helped describe the big idea. alexitoworkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08918737041142611169noreply@blogger.com