tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post5915804812987646708..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Gordon Matta-Clark at David Zwirnermoderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-78382407793824522082011-04-22T06:46:58.796-07:002011-04-22T06:46:58.796-07:00This is a really clean and straightforward review....This is a really clean and straightforward review. My one major critique is that I was looking for a better description of "Clark's cut sculptural works." You tell the reader where the piece was/how it was displayed, but not what it looked like. "The photos are in simple...buildings" sounds a bit awkward. It suggests the frames are displaying the holes. My only other suggestion would be to work on a more enticing introduction than "The current exhibition...".cathcannotflyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09123847279353525880noreply@blogger.com