tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post5957678536609373858..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Sonya Blesofsky at Mixed Greens: Renovationmoderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-35170148840567340162013-10-09T22:23:54.294-07:002013-10-09T22:23:54.294-07:00I like how precise and detailed this review is wri...I like how precise and detailed this review is written in terms of each piece that is in the show. The idea and reference to Blesofsky's notion are well pointed out based on the pieces. Also your style of writing (in parenthesis) sparks my interest to the little secrets that are to explore. I almost get a full sense of the space, so that I still want to see the show. The only thing I am missing is a recommendation. I can just assume you liked the exhibition because of the poetic way you are ending. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13687433317295669527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-13282796551174159212013-10-09T10:02:21.064-07:002013-10-09T10:02:21.064-07:00You give a good description of the exhibition, all...You give a good description of the exhibition, allowing us to have an idea of what it looked like even if we hadn’t been there. But you might miss some critical stance (except in your last sentence). You might have focused more on what could be disconcerting for the viewer for instance. As we discussed in class, the chromatic choice of the exhibition is something that might work in favour or against Blesofsky’s intention. I think whether you found it efficient or not, it is a detail very worth talking about.Sara Bhasinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12395169246326913206noreply@blogger.com