tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post6382971993046239625..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Jacolby Satterhwite, You're at Home (but do you want to be?) moderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-71935311986286120322019-11-07T19:35:38.398-08:002019-11-07T19:35:38.398-08:00Hi Abby!
I think you really captured the eerie, ...Hi Abby! <br /><br />I think you really captured the eerie, disturbing quality of the exhibition and there is some really good description here. <br /><br />Is there any reason you didn't mention anything about the artist's mother or the side room with her drawings in it? <br /><br />Also, I wonder if you could expand a little more on how busy and overwhelming it felt with the really loud sounds/music and the crazy colors and patterns. <br /><br />Finally, the following sentence is a bit confusing: "...the artist eerily superimposes animations over natural elements — figures dancing, drumming, and even dangling writhe throughout the large warehouse."<br /><br />It sounds like you are making a list of the natural elements, so that the "figures dancing" and the "drumming" and the "even dangling writhe" are separate objects or something. It also is unclear if the "large warehouse" is a space that is being depicted on screen in the films or if it is referring to the actual physical exhibition space. How can you make it clear that they are figures dancing, drumming, and writhing on screen, rather than real figures in the exhibition space? <br /><br />CaitoCaitlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18108007197832518994noreply@blogger.com