tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post6640868582784351291..comments2023-09-30T00:43:13.890-07:00Comments on The Current Season: Tania Bruguera at MoMA Untitled –Havana, 2000moderatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653277482083573538noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-71065006970296560582018-03-22T20:38:58.168-07:002018-03-22T20:38:58.168-07:00I think Tania Bruguera's work is very impressi...I think Tania Bruguera's work is very impressive and different and your review is very detailed and includes how this place looks like that is enough to make people imagine the exhibition and have a curiosity about her work too. However, I think your review also contains some of the unnecessary sentences such as "After waiting In a line for three hours I was finally..." and also uncertain descriptions like the piece "had a very powerful impact. " If you add more specific explanations about these unclear word, it would be better.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12377675812208401352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8466314672723988836.post-27497501496509822932018-03-22T15:53:52.142-07:002018-03-22T15:53:52.142-07:00I agree that Bruguera's piece was so effective...I agree that Bruguera's piece was so effective because it was completely immersive- the sugarcane on the ground, the use of fragrance, and near-total darkness all contributed to the mysterious and unsettling experience. I'm glad you mentioned the jarring difference between the darkness of the space and the stark whiteness of the gallery. Not only did my eyes take a long time to adjust, but it felt like I was entering a different world altogether. I think your review could benefit from more structure and organization, maybe dedicating a paragraph to description and context, and another paragraph for your reaction and thoughts on the piece. I also think it would be better to stick to using only first or second person point of view, instead of using both interchangeably.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06188319406050818071noreply@blogger.com